spitfireuk1's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Wah Wah Tube]

well

As often as I try to pick positives from your work I just couldn't manage to with this. I create shorts myself so I wasn't expecting a 10 minute cartoon but you couldn't even manage to inject one laugh into 30 seconds of flash?

I never try to get personal but your story reminds me of something an 11 year old would write not a 31 year old man.

all in all animation was poor, bsckgrounds are over used (seen the same one in all of your submissions) and you lack any form of comedy.

sorry to be so negative.

[The Adventures Of John 3]

4/10 because of the drastic increase in quality

Well done

You have clearly taken advice from everyone by improving you animation and a story writing skills.

2/5

[The Adventures Of John 2]

Sorry but...

If anything this was a step back in quality from the last in every aspect.

Work on a story and your animation technique then submit something...

[Legend of The LF Trailer]

Didn't like it... BUT

i got a good laugh from one of the reviews below this one.

'A man of 'dark orgin' huh?
I have no clue what you're talking about.' - made me laugh for so long and i don't know why.

Thank you for making a poor flash that resulted in funny comments.

x

[A Tribute To Jeff Weise]

Poor Jeff

No longer will he suffer at the hands of a cruel society

[Elmotional Death Scene]

Love all of your stuff

and this little gem has not let me down. Great.

[Someday We'l All fly Away]

4/10

The animation was ok in parts (I liked the flowers)
Nice message though portrayed boringly.

Work on something with a story.

x

[The Adventures Of John 1]

he went to the shop...

i wouldn't say its an adventure. work on the story, work on the animation (y)