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As often as I try to pick positives from your work I just couldn't manage to with this. I create shorts myself so I wasn't expecting a 10 minute cartoon but you couldn't even manage to inject one laugh into 30 seconds of flash?

I never try to get personal but your story reminds me of something an 11 year old would write not a 31 year old man.

all in all animation was poor, bsckgrounds are over used (seen the same one in all of your submissions) and you lack any form of comedy.

sorry to be so negative.

4/10 because of the drastic increase in quality

Well done

You have clearly taken advice from everyone by improving you animation and a story writing skills.

2/5

Sorry but...

If anything this was a step back in quality from the last in every aspect.

Work on a story and your animation technique then submit something...

haha

Well done, though the animations may not have been complex they still made me lol. Keep it up.
x

Didn't like it... BUT

i got a good laugh from one of the reviews below this one.

'A man of 'dark orgin' huh?
I have no clue what you're talking about.' - made me laugh for so long and i don't know why.

Thank you for making a poor flash that resulted in funny comments.

x

Poor Jeff

No longer will he suffer at the hands of a cruel society

Love all of your stuff

and this little gem has not let me down. Great.

4/10

The animation was ok in parts (I liked the flowers)
Nice message though portrayed boringly.

Work on something with a story.

x

he went to the shop...

i wouldn't say its an adventure. work on the story, work on the animation (y)

Good

I like this, really good work.

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Northumbria University

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